Story Snapshot Review - Written Manuscript Feedback

Get Clear on Your Story Before You Keep Going

You’ve been working on your manuscript, but you’re still asking yourself: Is this actually ready?

Before you spend months revising…
Before you submit to agents or publishers…
Before you burn an opportunity…

Get clarity on your story.

Our Story Snapshot Review is a quick, personalized manuscript evaluation designed to help you move forward with confidence — not guesswork.

NOTE: THIS IS ONLY FOR MANUSCRIPT FEEDBACK. IF YOU NEED A QUERY LETTER REVIEWED, CLICK HERE.

Story Snapshot Manuscript Review

Best for writers in the idea or early-draft stage

If you’re wondering:

• Is this the right age group?

• Does this idea fit today’s market?

• Am I missing something important?

• Should I pivot before I keep going?

This review helps you assess your direction before investing more time.

What You’ll Receive:

• Age & category alignment check

• Market-fit feedback + potential red flags

• Comparable title suggestions

• Our #1 revision priority

• Clear next steps for moving forward

Investment: $47

How It Works:

1. Purchase your selected Snapshot Review.

2. Submit your materials within 30 days.

3. Receive written feedback via email within 1–2 weeks.

No calls. No back-and-forth editing.
Just clear, structured feedback to help you move forward confidently.

Submission Requirements

For Story Snapshot:

• Full picture book manuscript
  OR

• First 10 pages of chapter book/novel + 1-page synopsis

All files must be submitted as a Word Doc or PDF in standard manuscript format (12-point font, double-spaced).

Important Notes

• Written feedback only

• Non-refundable

• Materials must be submitted within 30 days of purchase

• This is not a full professional editing service

If you’re looking for in-depth editing and hands-on revision support, you can apply to work with us inside Kidlit Fast Track.

Is This Right for You?

This is for the writer who:

• Wants to do this right

• Values clarity over guessing

• Doesn’t want to submit blindly

• Cares about writing a book worthy of a child’s time

You’re not just someone with an idea.

You’re becoming the kind of writer who builds intentionally.

If you’re ready to move forward with clarity, choose your Snapshot above.

This is for written feedback only. No requests for calls or resubmission without rebooking will be accepted.

Please note: This is a non-refundable purchase. In order to keep your evaluation spot with us, you must send your story manuscript per the guidelines within 30 days of purchase. Late submissions will be charged but not critiqued.